Again.

Blogging affords so many opportunities. To connect, to receive feedback, to edit, to obsess.  It shines a light on the writer’s process, inside and all-visible. What a gift.
(You can imagine me saying this with genuine enthusiasm or dripping with sarcasm and be right either way.)
The feedback piece is particularly significant for me a the moment.  [...]

snapshots

head loll down and to one side
jaw slack
chest balloon: blow in, out
see flowers in the dark
see them
think about work
soundtrack: pulse, night, honey
remember what happened
obsess
whisper mantras
psychic message in bottle: delivered
drive
stop for kitten
wonder if

hands push out skin suit
hard
from inside ribs   face   skull
more with
each intolerance.

cooperation is a choice.

wrap it tighter.
I want to feel what I’m breaking